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reader, stephen1127  +, writes (1 September 2008):
good peom and that is right i use to take weed an that f**ked me up
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reader, babewithbrains +, writes (27 August 2008):
 To Dazzerg!
The public demonises smokers to save the children - to stop it being cool! The same way we demonise drug abusers etc.
Wake up, and of course it's fair. you could stop - there's plenty of help nowadays, it's just pathetic.
Jelly
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reader, lotsofgiggles123  +, writes (25 August 2008):
lotsofgiggles123 is verified as being by the original poster of the question oh yea like uh sorry that i uh kinda if i have maybe showed to some people if the message was inapropiate but i just put this on ya know just show the reasons of why its bad so like uh im sorry to some of the people
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reader, xLovex +, writes (23 August 2008):
hahah I loveed itI'm thinking of saying it to my mumRemember you dont have to make EVERY line ryhme but maybe do a rymescheme like shakesperean sonnets (abab cdcd efef gh - i fink it was ) or something similar. Also put some emotions into to make it feel liek it has more depth. Maybe tell a story you once had in a poem form :D Good Luck but maybe you should post this on http://www.everypoet.org/ xxx
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reader, Dazzerg +, writes (22 August 2008):
 I smoke and errr it isn't really appropiate in my view for this forum but hey-ho....yes smokers are aware of the risks...yes there are plenty of other risky and damaging to others things that people still do...i really rather do not approve of the way society demonises smokers...not really fair is it...
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reader, anonymous, writes (22 August 2008): That poem was erm.. different.Not really for this type of forum is it?
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reader, lotsofgiggles123 +, writes (22 August 2008):
lotsofgiggles123 is verified as being by the original poster of the questionwell actully i dont need help i just want people to know about the evils of second hand of fisrt hand smokin
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reader, lotsofgiggles123 +, writes (22 August 2008):
lotsofgiggles123 is verified as being by the original poster of the questionwell i would to ha ve real actuall coments or something better i could do with this not like little coments like oo that was sooo cute like coments that can make this poem better thank you i hope you can take this to reall ness or to seriusness
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reader, :):):) +, writes (21 August 2008):
well done sweetie x
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