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Article - (11 April 2008) 4 Comments - (Newest, 18 April 2008)
A male United Kingdom age , oldbiker writes:

I'm not sure whether anyone will be interested in this or even why I should want to pass it on. I'll give you no background to it, some of that may be obvious.

A Footprint in the Sand

The tide rolls up the beach

Like saltiness of tears

His jigsawed heart lies scattered

I’m sure you’ll hear the cheers

Pieces sink into the sand

No use to search about

Some have gone and gone forever

Victims of a total rout

His heartstrings taut and twangy

Like some badly tuned guitar

Playing a tearful sad lament

That’s heard for near and far

Love’s clearly not so simple

As all the stories tell

There’s a costly price to pay

And goes from Heaven into Hell

Will they ever walk together?

To sunset, hand in hand

His prayers, they could be answered

Their footprints in the sand?

For now, the pain cuts deep

Like paper, his heart it tears

Like a slashing knife it feels

So what? You ask, who cares?

The silent answer tells

His heart, you’re on your own

This love so unrequited

Brings pain he’s never known

But life it must go on

And on and on and on

The years are short and counting

And soon time will be gone

But will one day that dream

Come true and be so real

The dream that keeps him going

Another hand to deal

They’ve dealt him Spades again

The Ace is in his hand

The sands of time are gone

Like dust upon the land

The clock is striking twelve

He hears a voice a-calling

He knows there’s no time left

The seconds are still falling

There is no extra time

No replay, no marching band

The whistle’s blows, it’s over!

And leaves a footprint in the sand

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A reader, anonymous, writes (18 April 2008):

That's really good :-) thanks for putting it on the site !

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A reader, anonymous, writes (11 April 2008):

Oh thats so beautiful thankyou for sharing LOVE MANDY XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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A reader, anonymous, writes (11 April 2008):

That's really nice :] I didn't understand everything, got a bit lost at certain points, but thats probably because its too early in the morning! Nice job, thanks :]

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A male reader, oldbiker United Kingdom +, writes (11 April 2008):

oldbiker is verified as being by the original poster of the question

oldbiker agony auntApologies for the presentation of this, it looked so much better (easier to read) in Word before it was uploaded.

The title is 'A Footprint In The Sand' and each verse is 4 lines long, rather than the jumble it came out as.

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