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My Poem

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Article - (29 April 2008) 8 Comments - (Newest, 21 May 2008)
A female United States age 36-40, notinthesane writes:

I don't know how to tell you

How I really feel.

I'm not sure that I even know

that it's really real.

I can't breath

and my heart is in pain.

My legs are weak

and I'm crying again.

You'd never know,

because I'd never say.

You'll never know that I feel this way.

I think about you.

I crave your touch.

You're all I am wanting.

I want it to much.

But you'd never know it,

for this I hide.

No, you'll never know this.

I keep it inside.

I don't know how to tell you

how it is I really feel.

I am so afraid

it might really be real.

My heart beats faster

for you and only you.

I have tried to stop it,

but there is nothing I can do.

I think this is real.

I think this is true.

I think that I might

be in Love with you.

But you'll never know

because I'll never say.

You'll never know

that I feel this way.

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A male reader, jezman United Kingdom +, writes (21 May 2008):

jezman agony auntwow...thats an amazing poem :)

i really like it :)

write more please :D

jez x

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A male reader, oldfool Australia +, writes (15 May 2008):

oldfool agony auntGirls who write poetry are sexy!

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A female reader, spanglegirl United Kingdom +, writes (15 May 2008):

spanglegirl agony auntwow, this poem preety much sums up how i'm feeling at the moment. You have a real talent.

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A reader, anonymous, writes (4 May 2008):

that's a great poem :-)

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A female reader, notinthesane United States +, writes (1 May 2008):

notinthesane is verified as being by the original poster of the question

notinthesane agony auntThank you so much for the comments. I love to write, if anyone is interested on reading more, please let me know. I would be more than happy to share.

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A reader, anonymous, writes (29 April 2008):

Pretty good stuff :]

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A female reader, BigSis United Kingdom +, writes (29 April 2008):

BigSis agony auntNotinthesane, that is one lovely poem.

Top marks to you girl!

xXx

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A reader, anonymous, writes (29 April 2008):

wow very nice!similar to something im working on..plagiarism!!haha jk but seriously you gotta a lot of talent there.

-michael

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