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writes:ok well i wright poems, and i am a boy i have been bullied for this befor and am relly ashamed of the fact thta i wright poems about a girl i am mad for. i was bullied by two people who found out, but the seemed to stop. but now i have no confidence and i want to show her how she makes me feel but i can. so my quetion is are my poems eny good ?if so should i tell her how i feel/show her them?(a poem follows)((i know i can't spell))i walk alone a lonly coastas the light of the night shimmersbeautifuly in the skyhiding the darkness with its glow i glanse to the water below me and i see the waves gently finding there way to the rocks belowi find myself higher and high the cliffs i now stand on are so clean flours blooming, grass growing so freash, untouched free agen i glanse at the sea and my eyes are met by the water shining in the moons glow now calm now settled i look up to see the stars the moon all so beautiful all so overwelming eny thaught in the world could run through my mind but only one doseonly one thaught only one dream only one wish and they are you i dream of holding you i dream of your smile i dream of holding you a dream allways ended to soon allways enterupted by the harshness of reality but it is the only time the only time you love me like i love you in the dreams i hold so dear close to my heart but i know i am no foolso i whatch and love in scilence because why would enyone as beautiful as you as smart as you as amasing as you ever love me so in scilece i will allways love you as it allways will be
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reader, anonymous, writes (17 May 2010): my boyfriend writes me poetry and i love it :) it makes me feel so loved :) i wouldn't show her the poetry just yet, but i would tell her you like her and see how she reacts. if she likes you back, date wait a month or two and show her the poems and she'll fall at your feet.x
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reader, TasteofIndia  +, writes (17 May 2010):
 Hey, I'm sure some people thought that Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Walt Whitman and Shakespeare weren't that great. I'll bet they got bullied too. But, don't let bullies stop you from expressing yourself! Poetry is a great outlet for that. I think you have a gift and you shouldn't hide it!
As for this girl, you should try approaching her and talking to her. Get to know her a little bit. Show her person-to-person that you enjoy her company and how you feel. Then, when you feel comfortable, show her your poetry, or give her a poem as a gift.
P.S. The only thing I would recommend, and please take no offense - poets are literary people. They live and breathe words, language. So, you may want to work on your spelling!! Poetry paints a picture, and ultimately how you spell things won't really matter - Lord knows Shakespeare couldn't spell his own name the same way twice - but still, work on your word work!! As you get more and more seasoned, a well spelled poem will really hit home harder. Good luck, sweetness!! You have the gift of prose.
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