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writes:hi,I cant help but feel I Dont belong here Anymore, I try and make the most of life but my chin just hits the floor, I'm tired I'm weak I'm loosing control. I have no zest for life I'm gunna walk throught the door. If I walk then I roll if I roll then I'm done that flashing bright light won't show me I'm done, I have the things to keep me here and the things to make me walk, I can't get the balance right, I'm a shivering wreck on the floor, we all had dreams once and some they come true... but my dreams have been shattered all because of you!!ok that's how I feel right at this very moment, please send back what you think or make off this. Reply to this Question
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reader, anonymous, writes (2 April 2010): ur welcome =]
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reader, doddster_24 +, writes (4 February 2010):
doddster_24 is verified as being by the original poster of the question i had an argument with my g/f and realy did feel bad the day , the peom let me vent my anger and frustratution out , helped alot , thanku christina
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reader, anonymous, writes (3 February 2010): Never lose heart!
Tomorrow will be a new day, full of promise.
Don't live your life as if it depended on one other person, live it for yourself from within so as to project the good that is within you.
NEVER LOSE HEART. As long as we're alive we CAN change. It is only in death that there is no further hope.
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reader, anonymous, writes (2 February 2010): well first thats a very strong poem and i hope you dont feel like this all the time and it sounds like your either having family troubles or maybe a relationship but whatever the case is i hope by writing this poem it helped you cope.maybe you can try these ways to help relieve you of stress1. [like you did] writing poetry. 2. talking to someone whom you trust.3. running or jogging4. crying.5. hug or hold something or someone hope i helpedsincerely, christina
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