A
male
age
51-59,
*avid70
writes: I wrote a poem for my wife ... is it too much?Will this poem help me get my wife back?She said she does not want space but to talkMy Love, My HeartThe woman who defines meThe person who most inspires meThe lady who completed meI did you wrongMy Beauty, My Dreams You are my vision of a futureYou are the light that I seeYou are my love, you are my meaningI did you wrongMy Friend, My Lover No one could ask for moreSupportive, a teacher and studentAlways growing and sharingYou make me Proud, you make meI did you wrongMy Wife, My CompanionYou are beauty I can only imagineYou are strong and an amazing humanYou are a beautiful mother and caring wifeI did you wrongYour Husband, your LoverI have not fullfilled my duties, I have not given support and intimacy when neededI have not been there emotionally,I have not been empathicI am ashamed and I have taken you for grantedI am learning, and I am committedI have much to offer and I am willingI will always fight to inpsire youI will always give my best to share and be intimateI will grow emotionally and offer a life of loveI love youI love you always Reply to this Question Share |
Fancy yourself as an agony aunt? Add your answer to this question! A
reader, anonymous, writes (21 April 2011): Your poem's nice but backing it up with your actions is what matters. You might have a chance to prove yourself since your wife wants to talk. Take advantage of it, and be all about your word because it sounds like you're straddling a peice of thread meaning this might be your final chance to keep the woman you love. Go for broke, and good luck.
A
male
reader, David70 +, writes (21 April 2011):
David70 is verified as being by the original poster of the questionHi All, Thanks so much for the advice it makes a difference. If I win her heart back I will write a more positive one. Take Care
...............................
A
male
reader, Cerberus_Raphael +, writes (21 April 2011):
She said she wants to talk? Then maybe a letter would suit this situation rather than a poem that would only serve to remind her the mistakes you made in the relationship. If she wants to talk, then talk to her about it. If she is intent on leaving then you have to let go or it will only get worse.
I hope that helps.
...............................
A
female
reader, Aunty BimBim +, writes (21 April 2011):
David, if you wife has left and you want her back, a few words is not going to get her for you. Your poem repeat that you did her wrong, maybe your marriage just got to the point where she needed to remove herself from it, and your wrong doings.
...............................
A
male
reader, David70 +, writes (21 April 2011):
David70 is verified as being by the original poster of the questionOops the poem actually was not simply to get her back ... pretty obvious answer there :)
...............................
A
female
reader, cupidus +, writes (21 April 2011):
Depends, what ever you did wrong is what she'll have to forgive you for and return in love.
If I ever got this letter from an EX I'd be very appreciative and complimented. I say give it to her with no expectations.
...............................
|