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Has anyone else turned their relationship into a song or a poem?

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Question - (13 January 2011) 1 Answers - (Newest, 13 January 2011)
A male United States age 30-35, anonymous writes:

A poem I have recently written

How many times have you forgotten me?

Your love not worthy of my time

Was it a crime to forget your day of birth

No love hear just thinking, maybe

Missing your birthday was just a simple mistake

Am I not good enough to be with you?

no no you just don't understand

the longing I have had for you

the nights spent wishing you were there

My heart has gone cold for I have lost something I once had

Something I thought your love could replace

No more love can I give when you ignore my pain

The times I have said I’m sorry just a worthless attempt

Just leave me in my own sorrow

For I will not shed a tear even know you were once my dear

In the darkness without a fear I won’t miss the person who was once so near.

This little bit of writing expresses a lot of my feelings towards this girl I liked a lot who may have liked me at first but I screwed it up. She won't have a conversation with me and its awkward when we pass each other at school.

I know she has tried to forget me because I am the one who likes her and I have tried to forget about her. Her time isn't worth what I have to say. I didn't wish her a happy birthday and she didn't notice. several nights I couldn't sleep because something you said to me made me feel special. but it didn't mean anything I have gone cold with my emotion in a way you will never understand. But I am not one to sit here and feel bad for myself, I will show her I am not a door mat.

question is has anyone else turned to writing a song poem paper story anything. I want to forget this girl but at the same time she may have been that special first love.

what have been peoples sign of love for people. Is it wanting to be there for them, wanting to listen to them?

thanks for the help

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A female reader, petina1 United Kingdom +, writes (13 January 2011):

petina1 agony auntYes, for centuries people have expressed their love in letters or poems. You sound like you are a romantic. you could send her one for eg:

I am such a silly fool,

I see you every day at school,

Can you forgive me come what may?

Or do i suffer for missing your Birthday.

The days are sad like im walking in the rain,

Could we move on and start again.

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