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*onfuddled545
writes:Is this valentine's day poem good enough for her? she's pretty romantic so I'm hoping she'll like itYou’re more beautiful than a starry nightThe sight of your smile clears away all my frightYou’re far smarter than the average bearYou put forth the effort that could get you anywhereIf you want to be there that isYou’re like Einstein without the frizzYou’re kind and charitable to all you seeBe that him, she, them, or meI love how sweet and polite you areYou truly are a beautiful shining starI know I’ve said you were beautiful but let me say it once moreLooking lovely for you is no choreYou could roll out of bed in sweats and a loose teeAnd you’d look like the most beautiful girl in the world to me.You’re the perfect girl I want you to seeYou’re the only one for meI’d do anything got you and you know it tooI want nothing more than to be with youI’d love to be the one to make you smileI’d never make you cry especially whileYou make me so happy so I’d do nothing lessThan return the favor and give you my best.*Note yes she is really smart, she gets all A's that's why the smart lines are there (: Reply to this Question
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reader, anonymous, writes (12 February 2010): dont mess with the mamma bears honey...rofl
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reader, anonymous, writes (11 February 2010): he's not old enough to drink but i am...ask memememememememem
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reader, anonymous, writes (11 February 2010): yes i love it, it made me smile. your poem is sweet, it shows you care, (id change the line, abov the bear) dont mind our Q~man, hes just a bit jaded, he think of poetry, as a way to get laid~ed,he writes a good poem, even sometimes kind, but in the area of young love, he tends to be blind. Mal
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reader, TasteofIndia +, writes (11 February 2010):
 If she's a smart one, she'll appreciate the humor and sweetness in your poem. It's not just some mushy gushy flowery poem, it's funny and thoughtful. I think she'll go crazy about this, especially at your age. I don't agree with Q this time... as a woman, if a guy gave me this, I would LOVE IT!!!
Happy Valentine's Day! She's one lucky gal!!
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reader, anonymous, writes (11 February 2010): That's great because it's from your heart.
The Einstein part may cause laughter just because when I read it, I just pictured a bald Einstein because you de-frizzed him. She may get a kick out of that anyway because that too is genuine.
What a sweetie!
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reader, anonymous, writes (11 February 2010): That's very sweet of you. I'm sure she'll love it. :-)
The Einstein line made me laugh. I love how you were able to be sweet, rhyme and put your personality in it all at the same time. Gifts like this are the best in my opinion. It goes to show that you care. Wish you lots of luck! Hopefully she'll love it and see how much you care.
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reader, x3chelciemarie +, writes (11 February 2010):
 this is a very cute poem! the girl who is reciving it is very lucky! its not only cute but has some humour in it (line with einstien no frizz) you should deff. give this to her! Good Luck!
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