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30-35,
*onely_B
writes:A hundred causes is between peopleBut for us truly neitherTo live like we live one without otherA hundred causes is separating usBut is one of them worthTo let us live,like we living?Tonight I lose my breathAnd I scream in the sky "come back again"Because we are like song without wordsNote without beat,story without endTouch without sense,eyes without faceLike brood without birdsLike train without rails,tree without ramificationLike volcano without slag,hero without glory...We are like this but yet I don't know why I love you...There is no help for my lonely heart
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reader, Manya  +, writes (22 May 2008):
Thank you for your beautiful poem -- your extreme sensitivity and embracing heart are a wonderful thing! I don't know why love sometimes doesn't keep going for both partners the same way when it seems so all-encompassing! I hear your agony, and I wish you new-found hope: believe me, love WILL come around again! Just keep hanging in there. Uncle Sneaker is right -- someone is around the corner, waiting for you!!
Much love,
Manya
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reader, anonymous, writes (21 May 2008): Beautiful honey.
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reader, Uncle Sneaker  +, writes (21 May 2008):
 There's someone, somewhere, thinking something like this:
I am anon, unknown to you and yet
I am within your broken heart.
In every sadness and in each regret
My love is ready; a new start.
I know you’re not prepared to see me now,
I know you need to grieve for love that’s gone,
I know your heart’s not likely to allow -
And yet I wait for love to be reborn.
I cannot take his place; I never could,
I know you’ll always carry him inside,
I understand all that, yet know you should
One day need someone by your side.
You cannot see me now; your tears
Fall hard as broken pearls in silver rain.
The heat of love lost, ringing in your ears
And anything I say would be in vain.
I wait, although I know not who you are,
And when the time is right I’ll come your way.
For now, I’m here so near and yet so far,
I am your love, and we shall meet some day.
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reader, Minelisse  +, writes (21 May 2008):
 That is beautiful... hope time heals your heart! Hugz.
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reader, anonymous, writes (21 May 2008): Thanks for that (wipes away tears) that really helped.
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